I received very few entries; not nearly enough to hold an accurate competition. I’m gonna have to cancel the contest altogether. Sorry!
Hello! Welcome to LWD’s very first writing contest. It will be held throughout the next couple of months and the winner will receive a prize!
Rules, Regulations and other Minutiae:
- The deadline is: November 30th, 2012 at 11:59 PM
- It will have two separate parts: Short stories, and poetry.
- Word count limit for short stories: 1,500-3,000
- Line limit for poems: 10-30
- Entries must fit the prompt provided, or they will be disqualified.
- Entries must not go under or over the limit, or they will be disqualified.
- Entries will be judged by a panel of anonymous judges based on originality, how well they fit the prompt, grammar, punctuation and syntax, and narrative.
- All entries must be emailed to:livewritedream@yahoo.com
- First place winners in each category will receive a $5 Barnes and Noble eGift Card, and promotion on LiveWriteDream for a month following the end of the contest.
- Second place winners in each category will receive promotion on LiveWriteDream for a month following the end of the contest.
- Third place winners in each category will receive promotion on LiveWriteDream for two weeks following the end of the contest.
The Prompt!
Everyone loves a good heartfelt story. So tell one! Write a short story or poem that will pull at the heartstrings; that will make us go ‘awww’; that will make us turn to mush. It can be happy, joyous, sad, or all of the above. But make us love it.
Happy Writing!
-Laikyn
Direct any and all questions and/or comments to our askbox! :)
I have not received enough entries for this contest. If I do not receive at least ten more by the deadline, there will be no winner.
Hello! Welcome to LWD’s very first writing contest. It will be held throughout the next couple of months and the winner will receive a prize!
Rules, Regulations and other Minutiae:
- The deadline is: November 30th, 2012 at 11:59 PM
- It will have two separate parts: Short stories, and poetry.
- Word count limit for short stories: 1,500-3,000
- Line limit for poems: 10-30
- Entries must fit the prompt provided, or they will be disqualified.
- Entries must not go under or over the limit, or they will be disqualified.
- Entries will be judged by a panel of anonymous judges based on originality, how well they fit the prompt, grammar, punctuation and syntax, and narrative.
- All entries must be emailed to:livewritedream@yahoo.com
- First place winners in each category will receive a $5 Barnes and Noble eGift Card, and promotion on LiveWriteDream for a month following the end of the contest.
- Second place winners in each category will receive promotion on LiveWriteDream for a month following the end of the contest.
- Third place winners in each category will receive promotion on LiveWriteDream for two weeks following the end of the contest.
The Prompt!
Everyone loves a good heartfelt story. So tell one! Write a short story or poem that will pull at the heartstrings; that will make us go ‘awww’; that will make us turn to mush. It can be happy, joyous, sad, or all of the above. But make us love it.
Happy Writing!
-Laikyn
Direct any and all questions and/or comments to our askbox! :)
Reminder!
Hello! Welcome to LWD’s very first writing contest. It will be held throughout the next couple of months and the winner will receive a prize!
Rules, Regulations and other Minutiae:
- The deadline is: November 30th, 2012 at 11:59 PM
- It will have two separate parts: Short stories, and poetry.
- Word count limit for short stories: 1,500-3,000
- Line limit for poems: 10-30
- Entries must fit the prompt provided, or they will be disqualified.
- Entries must not go under or over the limit, or they will be disqualified.
- Entries will be judged by a panel of anonymous judges based on originality, how well they fit the prompt, grammar, punctuation and syntax, and narrative.
- All entries must be emailed to:livewritedream@yahoo.com
- First place winners in each category will receive a $5 Barnes and Noble eGift Card, and promotion on LiveWriteDream for a month following the end of the contest.
- Second place winners in each category will receive promotion on LiveWriteDream for a month following the end of the contest.
- Third place winners in each category will receive promotion on LiveWriteDream for two weeks following the end of the contest.
The Prompt!
Everyone loves a good heartfelt story. So tell one! Write a short story or poem that will pull at the heartstrings; that will make us go ‘awww’; that will make us turn to mush. It can be happy, joyous, sad, or all of the above. But make us love it.
Happy Writing!
-Laikyn
Direct any and all questions and/or comments to our askbox! :)
Reminder!
- it’s OKAY to say “said”
- it doesn’t make you a bad writer
- you don’t always NEED to elaborate on HOW the words were said (see, was that so bad?)
- sometimes people just SAY something
- “said” is pretty much the only way to deliver dialogue without subjectivity
- you don’t always need subjectivity
- you don’t need to avoid using “said”
- it’s not a bad word
- don’t be afraid of it
FUN FACT its actually unprofessional to deviate from “said” too much
So essentially not saying “said” enough does the opposite of what you want
FUN FACT if i have to read an entire dialogue in which you use every word BUT ‘said’ i will not be able to take your dialogue seriously because oMg TeH dRaMaTiCs
because honestly unless you’re trying to differentiate a line of dialogue from the way someone would normally talk no other word will work
every time i see that list of ‘alternatives words for said’ i want to slap something
THOSE ARE NOT ‘ALTERNATIVES’ THOSE ARE COMPLETELY DIFFERENT WORDS WITH THEIR OWN NUANCES THINK TWICE BEFORE YOU USE THEM THEY SERIOUSLY DO NOT STRENGTHEN YOUR WRITING UNLESS YOU MEAN THAT WORD E X A C T L Y
like i’m not saying you’re bound to ‘said’ forever and always just realize WHAT THOSE OTHER DIALOGUE TAGS MEAN and that OVERUSING THEM has these consequences
- slowing down dialogue because readers can ‘slide over’ said but will pause to imagine other tags
- making your dialogue sound way overdramatic because everyone is SCREAMING and HISSING and GASPING instead of just saying
- confusing your reader about what is actually going on because the flow is weird and super over-the-top
‘said’ is actually the good guy
saying you should always use another words for ‘said’ is like saying your should always use another word for ‘to be’
most synonyms don’t actually mean the same thing and instead mean something very specific… which is great if you mean that word very specifically but try not to overuse because your reader WILL notice, whereas like 95% of the time your reader will just sort of ignore the word ‘said’ because they’ve been conditioned to do
you should believe me my lack of punctuation in this post is an A+ sign i know about good writing n shit okai
#ps when you’re writing dialogue you can use things besides the dialogue tags to convey emotion #talk about body language or atmosphere #also lots of times just the words the character chooses will convey the proper emotion/intent #and of course there are exceptions to every rule if you know what you’re doing #just some things to consider
reblogging because these people basically elaborated on what i meant
Yes. Good.
FUN FACT. If you’re speaking of Write World’s ‘alternative words for said’ list, I’d like to point out that yes, they could very well be alternatives. Because, alternative doesn’t mean ANOTHER WORD THAT IS THE EXACT SAME. Alternative means another possibility. Just throwing that out there.
This is written by the same people as the ‘25 things you should know about NaNoWriMo.
Check it out.
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Also, adverbs nuzzled up against dialogue tags are an affront to all things and make Baby Jesus pee out the side of his diaper, and when he does that, people die.
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